People Change

CHARACTER DIAGRAM OF "ROMEO AND JULIET"
Each of us is the main character and the star in a novel called My Life where the following rules apply:
(a) We are present in everything that happens to us from the introduction to the conclusion (birth to death).
(b) We have a single point of view: our own.
(c) We have no choice as to our physical characteristics, the country we are born in, our parents or our up-bringing and hence to what we are when we start out.
(d) Our reaction to outside stimulation is mostly controlled by our subconscious so we don't know how we will react to new stimulation until it actually happens.
(e) We strive to be the best we can be and do the best we can for ourselves and perhaps our close ones.
(f) Our character does not change much. The amount of change we are capable of largely depends on our experiences and our character.

In a novel, life's principles are repeated.


Points (a), (b), (c) & (d) are given to us (the readers) by the author. With the exception that in a novel there can be hundreds of points of view, if the author so decides.

(e) If a character does not strive to be the best that he can be, or does not do the best she can for herself and/or her close ones, then this character is a plant by the author. She could be there to further the plot (“plot device”), make us laugh (“comic relief”), excite us, etc. If we become aware of this immediately, we are reading a bad novel.

(f) The author defines the appropriate characteristics of each main character as the novel progresses. Variations from these basic characteristics, introduced through dialogue or action, complicate a character and make him more real, or as we say in literature, “round”. Few novels have round characters and invariably they are long and usually tedious.

GREAT EXPECTATIONS
THE SUN ALSO RISES
We can show character information with a character diagram. In this diagram, each character is represented by a rectangle, inside of which are written his name and major characteristics. Characters who interact are joined by interconnecting lines on which their relationship is described. Have a look at the character diagrams of Romeo and Juliet, Great Expectations and The Sun Also Rises which I have copied from The Book of Great Books.

The most important (and virtually unbreakable) rule that applies to all characters who change during the course of the novel is that the author must always show the events that have made this change possible. Just as a character's hair cannot change colour unless the author specifies that it was dyed or that a wig was worn, so an honest man cannot become a thief or a stingy person turn generous, unless the event(s) that facilitated this change are showed by the author. If these events are not described, we cannot believe in, or root for, the characters involved.

The process in which a character is changed by events is known as character development. Character development or portrayal is usually the short story's basic ingredient but it is also a significant part of all good novels ever written. I can't think of a classic without one. Carried to an extreme, a character's journey through life and the changes it imposes, may totally replace the novel's plot. Such a novel tends to be a series of anecdotes and resembles biography and real life.

We are so accustomed to the idea that plot is more important than character development, that we think that there is something is wrong when the two are reversed. In my latest novel Bird of Prey we observe how a number of events change two people. Some of these events take a paragraph to describe, some a chapter. The main event, the disappearance and recovery of five valuable ancient coins, consumes most of the novel's twenty chapters. It is obvious from the novel's description, make-up, and even its title that this is primarily a novel of character portrayal and development. Still, some intelligent people failed to see this reversal. What is the use of the first four chapters? I have been asked. Why doesn't the book start on chapter five and even omit a couple of chapters in between?

As Woody Allen's Annie Hall might say: “Laddie Dud, laddie dud!”


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